Susan:
Hi! I don’t know if you remember me, but we were in the same group for Understanding the Culturally Diverse Child last semester! Thanks so much again for bringing in those cupcakes at one of our group meetings, they were delicious and just what we needed to push through!
I really liked your post “I Still Believe!” You did such an amazing job of mixing your own life and views with those presented in the assigned readings. The quotes that you used really worked well and were integrated seamlessly into your post. I just thought that you brought a really interesting aspect to the prompt. You also presented your views in a strong and clear way, however they never felt “preachy” which can be difficult with a topic such as this.
Another post of yours that I thought was great is “Move Over Miley.” Again, you put a really interesting and innovative spin on the prompt. By pulling the “teeny bop” phenomenon into your post you took the prompt to a whole new level. I also liked the way that you brought in the importance of image in the music industry today. The tone is really great and your voice came across very powerfully. I just really liked this post, good stuff!
“Is Governmental Intervention the Way to Go?” was another awesome post! You consistently go beyond the surface level of the prompt and take your post to another level. Incorporating the JFK assassination and September 11th conspiracy theories, as well as America’s general obsession with scandal, into the post was fantastic. You brought up some really amazing points! The way that you presented your own feelings on the issue was very skillfully done. Once more you made your views clear, but I never felt like you were presenting them in an aggressive way. This is a very difficult thing to do, but you seem to pull it off with ease and style.
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