Ashley:
Your entry about Wright’s essay was filled with your own insight, which is always an interesting addition. The quotes that you used from the reading helped solidify your ideas. The Kahlo painting that you picked was really unique, she’s truly an original artist. I can tell that you put a lot of thought into the response to the painting.
Brittany:
I really liked the way that you started out your entry about Technology/Consciousness with the Billy Elliot example. It really draws the reader in! The quotes that you pulled from the article were really well placed. In the Frida post, you did a great job of describing the feeling and colors of the painting. I also liked how you explained your reason for picking this painting, it made the post really personal. I totally agree with you about wishing to know what Frida was thinking when she painted this piece, I’d love to know too!
Deirdre:
First of all, I loved the title of your blog about Wright’s article, it cracked me up! You did a really nice job of summarizing his article in a very thoughtful manner. Also, great use of quotes they really added to your description of the article. Your post about Frida was also very well done. The description of Frida’s eyes was wonderful; I think you really nailed her attitude. The vivid words that you used to describe the painting were spot on. Oh, and I completely agree with you about her need to wax her gentleman’s mustache-I’m glad someone finally had the guts to mention it!
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